You be the judge!
You’re going to look at some model answers to an Independent Writing task and give a score for each.
First look at the rubric Scoring the Independent Writing Task on page 677 of the pdf version and on page 650 of the printed version. It says what is expected of a text to get a maximum score of 5 or a low score of 1.
Next, look at the exercise “Scoring the Response” on page 681 of the pdf version of the book and on page 645 of the printed version. Read Responses 1, 2 and 3.
What score, from 0 to 5, would you give for each response and why?